I really like her body armor and the over all look. My only complain is her face and fingers. Her face reminds me of the Joker from Batman. It also lacks a feminine look and beauty. Her fingers have no nails, I think that the fingers would look better with fingernail. Her right foot looks smaller than the left. Over alli think that Ben did a great job.
Thanks for the feedback, I agree about the mouth, it annoys me too. It was in the brief that we had to see she is a vampire so the smile had to be wide enough to see her sharp teeth, I think I will redo it for the posting here. She does have finger nails but they are white on white and hard to see at this resolution.
I agree it is a far superior piece than I could ever create. I love his work and he is a very gracious artist, he never seems to take it as criticism, which is good because I would hate to offend. Just an observation.